by WallsOverSidewalks
I don't normally read gay porn because I am a hetero female, so it does not really stir me, but I liked this storyline and thought this story was hot and exciting! I will be sure to look for the next installment.
wow... really nice...
tho a lil pushy with the storyline...
loved it tho,
so give me more ^^;;
Good start to a hot series. Agree the story was pushed along but still was pretty hot. Liked the inter-conflict and can be nicely used to make the next chapter even hotter. Work on the build up to the next encounter, set the scene and it will be a good read.
Leaves you wanting to know more, which is what a good story does.
Looking forward to the next chapter!
Keep it up!