All Comments on 'Dave & Jennifer, New Roommates Ch. 02'

You had a few spelling errors and a few wrong words, but overall I really liked the flow and timing. Your visualizations were amazing. I can't wait to see how you handle the inevitable merging of the 'family'

Great stuff here. The editing is a minor issue but the slow buildup has made for an alluring read. Thanks and please continue with this series. Really looking forward to chapter 3.

The pace is just right. Hope to read more soon. Writing style is totally ok, no major issues. Very good results from a new author. Thank you for sharing.

I really enjoyed it and thought it went at the right pace. Can't wait to read more of your work!

I loved the series so far. It's been 8 months since the last chapter. When will chapter 3 come out??

using the similar names of Jennifer and Jessica made it almost impossible to remember who you were talking about ... and way to much background info. Nobody cares.