All Comments on 'Dave Ch. 01'

I hope he will share his wife with Dave. We can tell she wants that. Well written and erotic.

A fuck buddy is one thing, you are together for sex. A wife is the same. So while this is going to devolve in to a standard WACC story the concept is totally wrong.

The questions are: did she told her husband all she did during her college years? Will what is going to happen next destroy, or at least damage, this marriage, or this frienship? A friend is visiting and suddenly he is telling the friend's wife the threesomes they had in college? Why? We know the answer, but is that what a real friend would have done? 2*

i really don"t understand how love and devotion can remain in an open marriage, swinging, or sharing life style. seems to me can only lead to break up.

but to each their own. not a bad read but probably should have in a different category for this chapter.

It's obvious what his friend is after, but what will be left of the marriage after she is shared. 2*

Would be the big dicked buddy not banging the wife. Who invites a guy like this to visit? If he was a good friend, he would not bang the wife.

Hot loving wife story,Please do not let the haters here piss you off and write again soon.Thanks for a good hot story

# 1

This theme seems to bob up regularly and it puzzles me. Where I come from mates don't blab to your wife about past misdeeds. Not unless they want to be knuckled.

fag cuck shit.

I would throw his ass out of my house. You don't rat out your boy!

Open marriages rarely survive and if she is horny after listening to Dave drone on about how he pleasures the ladies, it won't be long before she is trading her current hubby for the next one.

Most people usually grow up a little even before college and almost everyone after they leave college, Dave apparently still hasn't grown up. Ex-roommate or not why would you still be friends with him?

Simple fact of nature.

Dave's cock in her pussy will just be the consummation of her and Dave's betrayal. It would be no big deal for Dave and wife to share contact information and hookup at a later date and a different location. So if its going to happen it will happen. We can go the wimp cuck route with husband handing his wife over to the better fuck, or we can go the cheating betrayal route, with the wife risking her marriage for some strange cock, or we could go with the married couple realizing that Dave is a selfish destroying asshole that they should flush out of their lives.

OK, your choice. Surprise me.

I also shared my wife after 15 years of marriage with my best friend. We fucked together for almost 10 years. It was an amazing time fire the three is us. She especially loved it. I got her a LS a virgin so she had never had another cock beofre and was addicted to having two cocks at once. Eventually she grew out of it. He got married and we went back to normal but we still remember the times and enjoy heated sex sessions. If you are ever going to share your wife, do it with a close friend, not some random guy.

fag cuck shit.

That's matter of opinion SharedSigne. If you're in the gutter like you are, it would be erotic.

Nothing beats sharing your wife with your best friend. She will be totally at ease and let go knowing she's safe and truly enjoy the moment. We also used our best friend for years until he got married. Best time we ever had.

Manipulating buddy out first thing in the morning.. you will have lost your wife, marriage and a good part of your audience.... the part that can read and appreciate a good author.

excellent LW story

It might have been interesting if it had been his wife instead of his girl friend that he shared with Dave. Not many people who read LW stories want to read about a man fucking his girl friend.

They must laugh at the people who are angry about a fictional story. Why else would they permit comments to their story. I think your time would be better spent flaming the mind control, non-consent sections if you are concerned about morals. I have not read such vitriol when it is a man having sex with a woman that is not his wife in a story.

crowd is still giving advice.

ROFLMAO it's so entertaining to see a bunch of ignorant idiots making fools of themselves while they're busy reading these stories and wacking off in the closet.

@ author: It's a little hard to rate a 1 page story (so far) so I'll wait.

This is a good beginning let's see where it goes from here.

"Rail" as a euphamism for having coitus? Or did you mean 'nail'? That is a more currently acceptable sexual violence metaphor.

why these authors write boring drivel about wimps and cucks pimping out their slutty whores to sex predators who are so 'hung' that it would make a stallion jealous, they don't care a hoot about their story, they write them just to rile and piss off the readers and get off on the rage expressed in the commments.

Paragraph three would start with my application of a lead pipe to Dave's cranium before tossing him out the front door. I would then let the wife know that entertaining such thoughts may not get her a repeat of the lead pipe but her exit stage left will be just as hasty.

Gordo the Cuckie has an opinion. Get over yourself dick head.Nobody gives a shit what you have to say.

Somebody is pushing yours I take it. What's with all the whining about what others do or think. None of your fucking business. Did you like the story? Can't tell from all that whining.

Shows how much she knows. If this is excellent, I would hate to read a bad one.

joins the countless in loving wives. That's what this category needed, more cuckies.

... but you put it in Loving Wives and all of the tiny penis losers whose wives left them are here bitching and whining and giving you 1's - you're at 2.5 average now and going down - doomed to low score Lit anonymity. Post chapter 2 in Fetish and maybe they will go rag on someone else.

*I* liked it and I like where it is obviously going.

within Russian Dolls

a story inside a story

So many stories which claim to be true read like fiction from the first moment. This reads like something that happened. Nice effort.

Another "true story" about some whores and a dick or two. Reads just like what it is. Horseshit.