All Comments on 'David and Kari (and Tiffany)'

by invisibleman90210

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C_frommnC_frommnover 13 years ago
Sounds like another Chapter

with two hott sisters and No Good reason to leave David should stay and Complete the Deal. Maybe they could become an all the time threesome.

They moving in with him.

dezurtdawgdezurtdawgabout 13 years ago
Foursome??

Great story! It got confusing just past the midpoint when you wrote; "As he closely examined Heater's cunt..." My brain instantly corrected that to read "Heather's", but then I realized there should not be a Heather in the room with Kari and Tiffany sharing David's bed.

Perhaps you should give your next offering a proof read or two first. Just don't quit writing!

invisibleman90210invisibleman90210about 13 years agoAuthor
Weird

I'm not sure how I did that. Brain fart I guess. Thanks for the input Dawg.

C_frommnC_frommnalmost 13 years ago
The Sisters

Deserve a Follow-up lets see if they can come to an Arrangement to get Together as a Threesome. Even after Marriage or in a Permanent way.

jhentaijhentaiover 12 years ago

thanks for an excellent and very hot story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
waste of time

no background and no character development plus no end all equal a waste of time.

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