All Comments on 'David & 'Lyssa Ch. 04'

by millennium_bard

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jdeerejdeereover 19 years ago
Great writting!!!

You are writting a very good story here. I wait in excitement for each new chapter. You are crafting a good sci-fi story. Please keep the new chapters coming.

NamizujsNamizujsover 19 years ago
Splendid!

When's the next installment?

The story is as thrilling as any..

Thanks

John

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
please sir I'd like some more...

As Oliver said, Please sir I'd Like some more.

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