All Comments on 'David Comes Home Ch. 02'

Terrific story to jerk off too.

Hi Karen I loved ur story and your narration . Would love to know more what happened.

Would it be possible for you to write me...e-mail me. I would love to write to you. This story is so hot. I would love to get to know you. Ill check back for an answer.

Sincerely

Jay

Loved every line of it. Can’t wait for chapter 3. Thanks

Especially loved masturbating to this story because of your picture on your profile page I don't need to imagine your frestly shaven pussy or your tits thanks Richard

A well written and very erotic story. I hope the author is OK and will eventually continue with another chapter or two.

Why did you stop? This was a fantastic story. I hope the ending is as good as the first 2 parts,.

Lets go, finish it.

Oh Jesus - this has left me as hard as fuck!

will it be out

Why did you send this series? It's great. Please write some more.

An excellent continuation of the story. Most men, if they are being honest, have this fantasy about their mother.

The first was a bit too short but hey great start Is this a true bit or fiction?

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time for more why did you stop you had it going so good

for more. We are all waiting!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE

My dear Karen, you are a highly gifted writer, with a totally liberated mind, as well as a voluptuous body. It's a great pity that you haven't continued this story of young David and his sex-savvy mother, a lady very much like you I suspect. Your characterization of the boy and his mom is brilliant. The mother yearns to see how her boy has developed, especially between his strong young legs, his big stiff prick and his loaded young balls. David of course, like all sons, is secretly eager to show his mommy that he's all grown up now, to let his mother gaze on and admire what makes her boy a boy. He's also anxious to see that wonderful hole between his mother's legs, his own birth canal, his mother's fabulous mommy-cunt. Right away Davey gets with the program, starts whacking away like crazy, as his mother stares at his fat throbbing prick and strums her motherly twat for her own and her boy's pleasure. When David unloads his heavy teenage balls all over the place, his mother is stunned by the massive doses of creamy semen her darling baby boy shoots, including on his own mommy's tits and even her mommy-twat. Karen, isn't the next logical step for the mother to open up her cunt to her boy's stiff prick? Why let all that potent young sperm go to waste when David could be spurting it up his own mother's cunt where it belongs, just like every boy's rich potent sperm belongs up the same hole he came out of?

More of the story. You promised and you should never break a promise. More pics would be nice too!!! Love to see an illustrated story!!

Very good writing, very hot. Would love to read more of your writing.

Well written, definitely exciting, left me very eager for more. Don't make us wait for long!

Sweet! LOVE to hear more....please, there has to be a chapter 3 for us all to enjoy? Fabulous writing, very erotic, love the fact you let him mastrubate with you....SO EROTIC!

What happened to "to be continued..."? Your writing is wonderful even if you say in your profile that you're not so sure. I am in awe of the openess and honesty of your profile. I hope that you will continue to post here.

Great story. Well written, sexy, and nasty. I loved how the son splattered him cum all over his cumming mom, and how she licked it off her fingers at the end.

Can't wait for the sexual experimentation to begin.

Mom needs to get son to fist-fuck her and have a bi-orgy with dad....LOTS of CUM for everyone~~~~~~

good beginning..but definetly get hubby/dad involved for a really sex charged family 3some..she needs to be their cumslut wanting multiple cumbaths from both dad and son at same time..being tag teamed by hubby/son at same time for hottt dp's...and her long time fantasy of having her stud jock son and stud hubby get into some really hott dad/son "bi" with her as the center of the action to the point of fisting herself because of it..hotttt