All Comments on 'David Gill Ch. 01'

I LOVEEE it so far. Please dont be one of those authors that take forever to post the next chapter! I need it!!! xoxoxo

Nice story, please continue.

Thanks for your input! I try to keep a steady writing schedule but i do sometimes get delayed. Don't worry though, there's more to come soon!

This was a very good starting chapter and I'll definitely now move on to the second.

This made me laugh:

"Well, at least he hasn't painted a satanic pentagram on the wall."

And even more after:

...one was by someone named HP Lovecraft. The illustration on the front was interesting...

:D Noope, no pentagrams... he is much more cunning!

this is a good start.. long may it continue