by wildehafer
Doesn't the babysitter, babysit? So what happened to the baby when David took Amber home?
Obviously these concerns are just distractions from you fantasy. But your disregarding them makes the story less believable and more farytalish. I would say more appealing to a less mature mind.
I am drawn to stories like this...older, kind male with younger eager lover. Very hot and well written! Thanks!
not to be a killjoy, but what about the nephew he left in an empty house?