All Comments on 'Dawn: A Tale of Submission'

by DragonSlayer_OK

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Anonymousalmost 17 years ago

Good Stuff

I find the third person stuff a bit hard to read, but other than that, excellent story. More please!!

dweaver999 almost 17 years ago

Very well done!

Very hot and very well written. Please tellus that you're going to write more of Dawn and her Master.

Anonymousalmost 11 years ago

:-)

WOW!

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