All Comments on 'Dawn Defiled Ch. 01'

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hisangelbeauty over 13 years ago

Sick!!!

this story is sick as hell!!!

but damn i liked it lol

Anonymousover 13 years ago

awesome story! keep writing, you've got a knack!

JorisKHuysmans over 13 years ago

excellent

Not normally crazy about dom/sub stories but this one is believable and funny, and very hot. Nice work!

realblackmale almost 13 years ago

AWSOME

This story is a hell of a read, it is simply Awsome Great job, with this story you have become one of my favorite authors please keep up the good work

lily4now over 10 years ago

Delicious!

Loved this! I especially love how you understand what she really needed- not the usual boring bdsm props or pageantry, but the actual dominance and control. Truly sexy. And an absolute pleasure to read someone who can actually write. Don't stop.

Anonymousover 4 years ago

page 3

"fucking the shit out of" is a crude phrase has, no real meaning, is not sexy or sensual and no half good writer would use it. there are any number of quality phrases that can be used to portray the same sentiments.

rickylaw01 6 months ago

Loved it!!

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