All Comments on 'Dawn Does Dictation'

what a hot nasty story, baby!! wish i had a job as your naughty coy secretary coming into to beg you to cum "in my ass" (hot hot hot line btw!)...going back to read it again!mmmseem to be getting an interesting response down...down...down....

A few minor punctuation errors, but few will notice.

The story is a hot little trashy bit of work, well written with decent indecent action.

Shit hot there guy. I loved it.

This is a clever story with a twist on the end that I didn't see coming. Very well done!

an excellent well written story definitely kept me wanting to read more .

Loved the ending totally unexpected but great

Wow! One of the best stories I've read on Literotica, not to mention one of the best story endings ever. Great storytelling, great story construction, and great narrative and dialog.

Cleverly is good start to really nice place.

Never slows down each part of the story flows naturally from the previous part The twist at the ending using. Just good product exposition all around fun to read

LOVE THIS STORY.