All Comments on 'Dawn Wood Ch. 01'

Great start !!!!

I like the possibilities and where this story could go. Left me a little flat, would like to see more. A couple of errors, need to proof read better, but looking forward to more.

Sure hope there is more. Good start and nice ideas ... more, please!

I loved the cliffhanger ending - look forward to the next chapter!

As others have said, some better proof reading wouldn't go amiss.