All Comments on 'Dawn's First & Only Ch. 02'

I enjoyed the first chapter of the amazing story yesterday, and now I have become engrossed in Dawn's story with this second chapter.

It is lovingly written and I like the brilliant idea at the end of making a donation to the Cancer Society, via the webpage link, in memory of Dawn.

I can't wait for the next part of the story.

Anne.

Sorry I was premature on the first past of your story, I now see there is still more to read.

I love how tender this man is o this youn woman, Great job writing.