All Comments on 'Dawn's First Light'

I was so excited to see this chapter posted and you did not disappoint. I cannot wait for the next installment.

Thanks. Too bad more folks won't take the time to read your stories. Great chapter once again. I hope that there is more to come........

i hav a question dat y didnt u use anna wen she could hav killed roark wid d flick of her wrist nd y show dis mercy 2 roark wen he went on massacaring every human soul on his way... plz do answer... thanks... great story btw :)

Thank you. Enjoyed from start to end

T4.5

A great read would be a fantistic one with a little more editing. The misteisteps, while reading, can be detracting from the experience.