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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Why bring Pan into the tale???

A pretty good story until you decided to bring Pan into it and turn the story into a sick, twisted incest piece of crap! Doing that pretty much explains the rating score difference between part 1 and 2.

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