All Comments on 'Day Hike'

Some of the best sex I ever experienced was in the woods on summer days. Looking back, I'm amazed we didn't get caught. We just got bitten by bugs, long before anyone had heard of West Nile virus or zika.

In spite of the story describing some hot sex, and describing it fairly well, the story felt a little cold. There is nothing there to describe these two people for us or to explain why there was all this sexual tension between them already from the start. They walk together for hours, but we learn more about how they arranged the parking of their cars than what's on their mind and what emotions other than arousal that passes through them or between them.