All Comments on 'Day Work'

Great Story. Good, but quick character development. Wonderful last line to the story lol!!! Really liked that. Keep writing.

Bruce

Very well written and sweet. I love the naïveté of the virgin experience with the oral sex. Beautifully done.

Other male authors could learn something here. Well written, good story and very erotic without being crude. Just what this site is supposed to be!

Please write more like these! Sarah and Lucky - both terrific, literate, sensual and exciting tales. The set-ups work, the stories flow wonderfully, and are wanton without being crass. A rare find.