All Comments on 'Daybreak Ch. 07'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
daybreak

i love this story wish the chapters would come faster

spearman1spearman1almost 15 years ago
Loved it!!

Excellent chapter!

sinerasineraalmost 15 years ago
Another great one!

I'd love to see them come quicker, too - but as a writer I know they come when they're ready and not before... just please please please don't leave us hangin' ;D

starry_nightstarry_nightalmost 15 years ago
Excellent!

He's patient too? I'm liking Jameson more and more with each chapter. It's great getting to know each of the brothers as the story progresses. Interesting scene there with Liam. Did he have his heart broken before? Looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks for giving us such regular, fast updates!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Question

I'm slightly confused as to why there are 12 brothers and not 11. The twins being born should've only made the total be 11, right? Why are there 12 again? Very sorry, but I remember being confused in previous chapters too as to how there came to be 12. Overall, well done.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
yes, there are 12

royce set out to impregnate 10 humans, which he did... but one gave birth to twins, so he had 11 sons. royce later seduced princess cassandra, but abandoned her before he realized that he'd impregnated her... resulting in his 12th son, andraemalek.

shortydeeshortydeealmost 12 years ago
Love Euan!!!!!!

When he turns into a large cat it is a lot of fun.

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