All Comments on 'Daydream Believer'

Good story, especially for a "virgin" author. ;)

i liked it. keep up the good work. hope to read more stuff from u in the near future

Excellent story. Humourous but sweet in the same time. you should put it in the H&Satire section, is a better fit and would surely get close to the top.

Thank you for all the comments. I wasn't sure which section to put it in as a first post. Not sure I can change it now.

Very well written story and enjoyable to read. Thanks!

I actually read the story and got mind fucked ! Geezusthere was no warning label or shit! I claim that I appreciate a twisted mind and imagination (especially erotic) but you took me over the line in such a subtle way that I took the hook, fuck! By the end of the tale I was like.. OK, that was special. You stretched my mind around this very weird idea .. but - thanks. Like I said "that was special". OK, your writing style made it so easy to ignore (we could call that very good skills) the writer and get into them and whatever was going on with this "situation" see already I had taken the hook! Good job (who ever you are) I enjoyed myself and got lost in it. It was silly but more than that too. Some silly things to think about. slowrdr@aol.com aka Scotty (thanks kid, I liked that)

and it was just as strange!! Scotty

Fun light version of the classic body swap.

Thanks