All Comments on 'Daydreams'

that wasn't even a nibble, come on where's the starters. PLEASE SIR/MISS (you never know these days) I WANT MORE

This is a tease for a commercial film project.

I thought this story was going to be long, as you said that it would be a slow burn

Really, a lot more

i would be wondering why they were together for 6yrs and not married,then ask myself is that the catalyst for the lesbian turn in her sexuality?i would also wonder why we had to go from boring sex to dream then a memory without a distinction of the scenes.so far this was no teaser more like writers notes.

With a little more development, continuity, a trip to the bar where she an Eve actually get it on - you could have something.