All Comments on 'Daydreams Pt. 02'

Look forward to the next,,,,, like the details and style

I love that this is taking its time to unfold!

More please,

Thank you!

L

I read the first installment of the story, but it seems superfluous with how this installment runs. You could have easily started with this chapter skipping the first entirely or even swapped the two parts. Swapping would have been an interesting way to build tension. Just something to consider in the future.

Nice sequel! The one thing missing, however, is a description of their outfits. Please keep this in mind when you write the third chapter that we, simply, must have!