All Comments on 'Days Forgotten but Not Lost Ch. 04'

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Anonymousalmost 9 years ago

Your most intriguing work so far... :)

Definitely love the mystery!

I hope this finishes with a happy ending!!!

DonnaBeck almost 9 years ago

Fantastic

I thought I knew exactly where this was going, but Ben just threw me for a loop. And I love being tossed around like that. Well done!

Anonymousalmost 9 years ago

Happy Ever After Please!

I hope there is a happy every after and that her girlfriend is not a real friend!

dgfergie over 3 years ago

friend gives warning?

Maybe she's not a real friend? Memories coming back. Big mystery. Keep writingm nice story.

Anonymous11 months ago

Vicky seems like a SLY BITCH......SUDDENLY SHE CARES ABOUT AMELIA

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