by JadeXX
It felt rushed as you went on with the story. I felt that there wasn't a good grasp of who the characters were-- the guy felt like a ghost than anything else.
hey JadeXX:)
i wont deny its kinda romantic noncon.....;) but at the end the women always choose to stay on with the kidnappers,rapists and torturers who hold them prisoner? ;) what a laugh!! ;)
when the mind of the woman is the creation of the male author,this is exactly what one can expect!!;)