All Comments on '(DBZ) What Once was Lost'

good story slight errors but still one of my favs

like the story, needed some editing... but keep a it, when u get tired of celebrity stuff it'd be great to see you write something other than celebrity... or a goku story bahahaha good work

Like I said great story the one thing I didn't like however was how all the girls that went with Videl just kind of diapered after v\Videl finding Gohan. I would have liked to see them at least search for Videl a little bit. Then there reaction when they see Gohan and Videl back together not to mention just having had sex.