All Comments on 'DC Transitions Ch. 01'

by bittyrey

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ZoeyWZoeyWover 8 years ago

Don't use words like "biological male"

Look at my avatar. Do I look like a male, to you?

Otherwise good story.

ChrispeChrispeover 8 years ago
Rubbish

I didn't read any further after you mentioned ten inch dicks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
I can say only one thing!

BITTYREY BITTYREY--CARS AND TRUCKS!

BITTYREY-BITTYREY--YOUR STORY SUCKS!!

BITTYREY-BITTYREY--LOST THE FIGHT!

'CAUSE

BITTYREY-BITTYRET--YOU JUST CAN'T WRITE!!!!

HeisenhugHeisenhugover 8 years ago

*sigh* I see the comments are maintaining their usual high standards /s

Aside from a few clichés the writing wasn't all that terrible.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Ready for ch 2

I thought it was wonderful. As a trans woman I could see myself and so many of my friends in the main character. For all the haters I say if you haven't walked a mile in those heels then don't judge.

MonicaCDMonicaCDover 8 years ago
Nice beginning

I wish I had the courage to do what you did in this story. I am too old to start living the life I would like to live. I am also a father to a young son and would not risk changing things in his life just for me. I look forward to reading more. And all the negative haters can eat a fat dick( you know they would love to anyways).

LadyPenelope784LadyPenelope784over 8 years ago
Liked it

Xxxx. Relate to this very much. Xxxxx

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Proofreading?

"recognize your new identify?" I think you mean "identity." Do you know how to proofread? I doubt it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
I can identify with this story

Wonderful story and very well written.

Wish it had been me all those years ago

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Good start

Love reading this

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