by bittyrey
Don't use words like "biological male"
Look at my avatar. Do I look like a male, to you?
Otherwise good story.
BITTYREY BITTYREY--CARS AND TRUCKS!
BITTYREY-BITTYREY--YOUR STORY SUCKS!!
BITTYREY-BITTYREY--LOST THE FIGHT!
'CAUSE
BITTYREY-BITTYRET--YOU JUST CAN'T WRITE!!!!
*sigh* I see the comments are maintaining their usual high standards /s
Aside from a few clichés the writing wasn't all that terrible.
I thought it was wonderful. As a trans woman I could see myself and so many of my friends in the main character. For all the haters I say if you haven't walked a mile in those heels then don't judge.
I wish I had the courage to do what you did in this story. I am too old to start living the life I would like to live. I am also a father to a young son and would not risk changing things in his life just for me. I look forward to reading more. And all the negative haters can eat a fat dick( you know they would love to anyways).
"recognize your new identify?" I think you mean "identity." Do you know how to proofread? I doubt it.
Wonderful story and very well written.
Wish it had been me all those years ago