All Comments on 'De-flowering the Babysitter'

Excellent story. Just the right mix of lust and love. Can't wait for your next one.

Love when the good people win

Usually this type of affair does not turn out so well.The wife or babysitter's parennts find out and there is hell to pay.

This was a lot more pleasant than expected - it managed to be sexy without any of the nastiness stories like this can get into. Hot stuff!

I was happy with how she lost her cherry as it seemed you knew what you were talking about, not ramming fingers in and expecting there to be a hymen left, broke the hymen soon after the head of the cock went in not 6"-8" like so many of those clueless writers do.

Nice to have a happy ending to a story like this as it could have turned very bad.

Liked that love soon outweighed the lustful fantasy. Quite a romantic tale. I was saddened, somewhat, as it seemed rushed and abrupt at the end. Still worth five stars, though.

It is nothing more than a teen-aged boys wet dreams. An 18 year old virgin heretofore uninterested in sex overnight develops a seemingly insatiable hunger for fucking and cocksucking. Yeah, right.

The author makes feeble effort to excuse the protagonist's adultery. I assume that the author, if and when he switches to LW, will be a leading proponent of burning the bitch.

Feedback: You don't get an original story by pasting a few stock characters together and giving them lines worth of a high school play.The women had little insight into their actions, nor did they try to find any.

2 stars

Man, Witton is a hostile, angry bitch! Im betting shes the uptight, never putting out, uses sex as a tool, cold fish in real life and took offense to the story, heh.

... with a good ending.

If only real life could be that way.

If only life was like this, as a previous comment said. Still, I like a happy ending. EVERYONE wins - even the ex.

Nice story, but I miss a lot of commas.

So sweet I really felt for Carly for some reason I’m glad she got a happy ending

Brilliant loved this story so glad of the outcome glad Carly got her happy ever after