All Comments on 'Dead Friends... with Benefits? Pt. 03'

The degree to which I'm enjoying these makes me wish you'd put a little more effort into them. If you're not going to get an editor on here, then at least take a moment to read what you have before you post it. The shifts between third- and first-person perspective took me out of the story.

When will u post part 4

deadly waiting for next part

how victoria take life decision will she cuckold her bf with zombies or get married to zombie horde ( my imagination victoria a pregnant in bride white dress with many male zombies as brides)

plz continue

I dig this kind of story. Make more please~