All Comments on 'Dead in a Storm'

Just when you think the erotic potential of the vampire myth has pretty much been exhausted, here's... this.

It's not perfect. ('Scraped' rather than 'scrapped', for example.) But it's close. The lyrical quality of your writing adds to the eroticism of the tale and, satisfyingly, there are hints about the world of the story that remain unexplored.

All of which begs the question: "Could we have some more, please?"

Very much enjoyed, hoping this is just an opener!

Despite the brevity of the story, you have managed to pack a fair bit of world building in here. It is certainly intriguing how the vamps work in this alternate world. Also, enjoying the lesbian soldier.

There could have been more to the sex, but it was certainly raw and domineering. Overall well done.