All Comments on 'Deadly Friends/Unexpected Enemies 02'
by FinalStand
- 16 Comments
fanfareover 10 years agoI look forward to FS talented writing as he meticulously reveals this tale of the clash between Day and Night.
Anonymousover 10 years agoDamn, that's a lot of names to keep track of :-). Really enjoying this. FS, you are a fine writer, please keep it up.
Anonymousabout 9 years agoGood story and a awesome start to a new series, i hope there is more
cmsheaffalmost 9 years agoThe plot is entertaining. The editing gets a B. The lack of follow through is disappointing. I presume that the temporal hiatus suggests loss of interest in the project. We really need a way on this site to detect a series that is completed before spending hours reading a story that has no prospect of finding an ending.
shyqashover 8 years agoJust to let you know the story isn't dead, just that others took precedence.
Anonymousabout 8 years agoI agree with the disappointment a reading a story that just stops in the middle of things. However, I read for enjoyment and I still enjoy these unfinished stories. This guy writes well enough that even knowing the story will never be complete, I still will read and enjoy. Just saying.
J_Reader_Comicsover 7 years agoFor those that might check here but don't read LNH, Really you should go read that series too. However, FS has sent the next installment to this series to his Editors, I'm quite excited to see it. Tesio is a fun character and the struggles of the three can only get more entertaining.
FinalStandover 7 years agoAuthorChapter 3 has been submitted to Literotica. Yay? And it only too three years and six days since Chapter 2 came out. I really hope I'll have Chapter 4 our sooner.
Anonymousover 7 years agoThat patience is a virtue. Thank you for giving your fans another chapter!
Anonymousover 6 years agoI like the action but the stories pacing is so fast I don't care what happens to any of the characters. Really the three main characters could be tortured and I could care less because you gave me no reason to care about them. We know little or nothing about them.
Jackspeed2uover 6 years agoDon’t waste your time. It’s a great HALF story.
4 years and unfinished.
Literotica needs to make authors marks a story as complete somehow, check box or something. Then if incomplete after a year the story should be automatically deleted.
Incomplete stories are the bane of Literotica.
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