All Comments on 'Deal Closer Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Activities

Activities like this should be confined to the inflight toilet,and not take place in the cock-pit or cabin.Worth a fifty for having a go.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
HARD TO BELIEVE

I have read your biography,find it hard to believe the story not to bad.What happened in the SR71 to get you to write this sort of literature.EX RECCE PILOT

Ken NitsuaKen Nitsuaalmost 17 years ago
It all happens...

kind of fast, doesn't it? Last chapter the guy was getting introduced to gay sex and by the end of this one he's dominating and participating in a double-penetration scene? The sex was hot to be sure but my sense of credibility was stretched just about as far as that poor FA's asshole :-). Best, Ken

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
A CHANGE

Dont often read this type of story do not really understand it,gone back to tales of women with big tits ,lesbians and incest,best of luck to you anyway.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Fantasy is hot

I have found the first part of this story, and this part, over the top hot fantasy, and thoroughy enjoyed them. I got just what I wanted to, and a smile on my face. Seeing that is what I come to these stories for, I'm happy. Here's hoping there is another part. This isn't real life, (damn, and I wanted to be CJ), but it is fun. Thank you Mr Author for taking the time to write it and post it.

AsuedeAsuedeover 16 years ago
Lovedthe DP inthe Asshole

Loved the DP action in the samehole with the cocks rubbing one another and the double load in the asshole. Would have loved to be the DP recipient or one of the givers. I've never had two in the ass but would love to try or one in my asshole and one in my mouth

Prof BillProf Billover 16 years ago
Wish this had happened when I was on the corp jet!

This series sure has me hard and horny. Wish it had happened with me the only time I rode the corporate jet. Of course, no one in the company I worked for appealed to me--and they were all homophobic--but I sure would have loved it. I enjoy multiple player parties! Looking forward to reading the rest of the stories.

dinkybootsdinkybootsalmost 12 years ago

its a fucking story.?

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Former SR71 pilot, currently professional writer and book editor; writes under name "habu" on other erotica sites. My erotica books can be found under the author name habu or Dirk Hessian (and coauthored books with Sabb under the names Shabbu or Stephen Kessel) at S...

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