All Comments on 'Dean and the Dryad Pt. 02'

by brownbeauty

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Comentarista82Comentarista82over 8 years ago
Interesting idea...

...although the brevity confuses me; despite that, I rated it a 5. I love the kind of "hot dream" Dean had and you made it seem real. What I can't figure out is if you're drawing Zena like a fairy or if she's some supernatural creature, since she bears no scars from fighting. I'll be interested in finding out. I love how sensual and sexy Zena is though--it captivates me. :)

TeurastajaTeurastajaover 8 years ago
nice!

I love some of your turns of phrase, so clever! But I wish you'd given it another read through before submitting; the accidental name changes were confusing. Can't wait for more :)

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