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almost restrained in its simplicity and clarity. Looking forward to more diary submissions!

I must say that this is a well written story. Sounds real.

A SWEET & TENDER STOY,but on the predictiable side...Diffcult to believe U was a VIRGIN at 18 <<< Daddy Should of gotten U 4-5 years befor then. >>> UR name love_these_breast <> had gotten my attention <> I was drooling thinking U were going have a description of firm pert Acup Teen Breast <<< BUT you hardly mention them,,,,major let down,,,but I'll read U again :))

Almost real enough to taste the juices. Cook up more - please!

Congrats on a great first story. Please keep writing and posting.

i call my husband daddy in bed its dirty but i love it and so does he nigther of us know our fauthers so i dont think its bad to think those thoughts so oohh well it makes me hot cause he is my big daddy.