by funnyfish100
that is a new twist, like it, look forward to the next chapter.
Yes, it was a new and different twist. That being said it was also well thought out, written, and presented. Keep up the good work.
Love what you've done so far, looking forward to the next installment. Maybe some outlandish modifications are in order? You know the deal: huge everywhere that counts. Great work so far
Wow, wasn't expecting such a positive reception! Thank you all for the kind comments. I'd love to continue this story, so I'll do what I can, but time is short these days. I like the concept of outlandish modifications. Might keep it a bit tame for the first few installments, but I'd love to see it evolve. Stay tuned!