All Comments on 'Dear Santa'

THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!!!

That was one of the BEST stories, christmas or not, that I have EVER read in MY LIFE! Great tempo, good rhythm, excellent phrasing that allowed me to actually visualize the entire thing in my head like a mini-movie. You are AWESOME, please write MORE!

Katrina Thiessen

Winnipeg, Manitoba

Very touching and written with total class! One of the best tales that I have read this year!

I really enjoyed this story. Creative and well-written. One of the best I've read this year.

I have to say that this is one of the best stories i have read on this site. The creativity and detail put into this story was astounding and allowed me to completely visualize the events that were being described. Best of luck to you in the competition and I do hope you will continue to write stories of this caliber in the future.

It was one of those "what if" stories we'd all love to see in the office. Good holiday fun

unique story definitley my favourie

Loved it! Great fantasy!

As a woman I find this story rather degradingfor our sex - no woman in her own mind would let a man treat her in front of a lot of people their very first time - its just ridculous and Carl is nothing but a dominating prick as well as she is nothing but a pay roll prostitute in her behaviour - sorry no stars as I find this embarrasingly disgusting

*runs to write her letter to Santa

Simply excellent