All Comments on 'Death in the Desert Ch. 02'

The Rat Patrol lives!

Good story, having been and infantryman years ago I was kinda weirded out by the sex in a combat zone, but hey, it's fiction.

And a damn good story. I really wish the author'd of finished it. The long range desert group sounds like a lot of fun. Also wouldn't mind if there were some un-neutered males around. I mean you've got to have some to do the nasty with the sexy women so there'll be more sexy female soldiers in the next generation.

All male chauvinist pig sentiments aside, this is a damn good story. The only problem is that it wasn't continued.

This is the grant problem here with sooo many of u authors u write good story lines n never finish them. Usually i ck b4 reading didnt this time n got screwed with n unfinished story shame on u. Still give ya 5 stars