All Comments on 'Death in the Desert'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Seriously. WTF! What happens when there are two people named Jane? That must confuse the shit out of them. Basic battle tactics seem unheard of. And the MC sure does fall in and out of love real easy.

Crusader235Crusader235about 1 year ago

Good story can't wait for more. 5 stars.

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