All Comments on 'Death of Ingrid, Birth of Venus Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Excellent!

Oh my what has poor Ingrid gotten herself into? Loved how overwhelmed Ingrid gets at Brutus's touch! Desperately awaiting part 2!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Amazing already

Can't wait to see what comes next. She's so beautifully completely overwhelmed. Lucky.

mel_pomenemel_pomeneover 9 years ago
What a marvellous story!

I had somehow missed Part One and have just had the pleasure of reading both parts together. This is some story! May I welcome you to Literotica, beg you to write much more for us and shower you with thanks and stars -- five of them!

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