by tgirl_Mary
Loved it. But closure is a bitch. It's not finished, I think.
While there are some things that could've been done better, all in all, this is an amazing story and definitely deserves five stars.
Can't wait for sequels (if there are any sequels planned).
Well that was excellent! Thanks for the great story and universe! I do have some questions: Now we have two couples with further stories, (The Twins and The Debutants for lack of a better term) each beg more exploration. How do they interact (foursome)? How do Molly and Tiffany evolve their relationship and make college work? What do the Twins do at film school?
This was simply fantastic and I hope you continue it. If you don't thanks for sharing it!
tgirl Mary -
Great story. Great language. Great Plot. Great ending.
Now, room for more.
Two debs and two goth - all together now?
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- A fellow jerker
4/5 stars as there are some typos and maybe one or two grammar errors in it; but everything else is perfectly good. I would like to read more as well constructed stories of yours as this one.
I am a mature tranny and came from a yuppie school full of phoneys that you described.believe me,i understand your point.luv,candi