by bc_alucard
Well crafted a good read, lots of historical detail. I enjoyed your imagery.
I love Vampire Stories. Your punctuation and grammar need some work, never the less, I have given it a maximum score because I enjoyed it. It was worth while. I look forward to the next chapter.
Great seduction, all knotted together at the end.
You must have done a lot of research, I felt I was there, the way you describe it, fantastic I want more