All Comments on 'Decadent Sin Ch. 01'

great story......amigo.

First off, wonderful descriptive writing and the story flows with such ease. I like the character development of Archer and Gabriel, and can't wait to see what happens. However, I'm not digging the fact you've included women (for sexual purposes) in the piece. I know it's hard to pick one category to place a story in but when I read pieces in the gay category I expect stories to centrally revolve around gay characters (or bi men but only with other men)--I don't expect bi men having sex with women. If this is a "journey of discovery between two friends" why include women sexually? Who knows, perhaps women will disappear in later chapters and the story will focus on Archer and Gabriel. Including the women honestly distracts from what has the potential to be an amazing story between best friends-turned lovers.

Absolutely loved it!!! Keep it coming.

Too much pussy! Actually, any pussy in a so-called gay male story is too much. Probably a good story but it's in the wrong category.

This is a great story!! I like the fact it had some bi play in it..since there is no section for it on lit!! Please give us more....

Great character development and hot sex - please don't make us wait too long for the next chapter... As far as which category it is in - you really can't win can you??? If it had been placed in erotic couplings, first time or group sex, you would have had complaints by those who don't wish to be confronted by men having sex!!! Maybe Lit should start a 'bi' category...

Sorry, I gave up on this one before the end of page one. This story reeks of arrogant predators dying to take any person in sight for their pleasure.

the Ct. Yankee

Some comments reflected displeasure with the categorization of this story; I found it difficult myself to do so; it wasn't exactly gay, but obviously not a straight or group sex story; However, Literotica doesn't have a "bi" category so I just shrugged my shoulders and selected gay. Had I done erotic couplings there definitely would have been some offended by the man-on-man action. Catch-22. As far as there being too much pussy, well, I'm a big fan of pussy and just couldn't help myself.

A comment was made labeling Archer & Gabriel predators; that one I must respond to. True predators don't take no for an answer; that was not the case here. I wonder if a double-standard was at play here; had it been two woman on the "prowl", as it were, would the comment even had been made? Hard to tell, but I couldn't let that one pass.

It's highly doubtful this story will develop into just being about Gabriel and Archer. As always, I appreciate any and all Feedback, and look forward to any suggestion or comments you, the readers, would like to share.

As for my other series involving Savannah, that story will be coming to a close in the next little while. It will take some twists and turns even I didn't expect, but I think loyal Savannah fans will enjoy it. Thank you EVERYONE for your Feedback, comments and suggestions, whether they be positive or negative.

Nuff said.

I know it has been a while since you visited this story, but I loved it! I truly hope you come back and finish it...soon! Unfinished stories give me a *twitch*! Seriously though, I really do love this story!