All Comments on 'Decisions Ch. 03'

by Holter

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AllintheheadAllintheheadover 7 years ago
Well done

Im beginning to think this would make a very good movie

MidnightJoyMidnightJoyover 7 years ago
Great!

I really like the story you have going and I love your characters so far. My only gripe is that we haven't seen much the other three that make up the core groupe of his friends. I know you are just starting and have a lot to do in setting up your world, but I'd like to see more of them since they are such a big influence in Chris' life. Over all though I love this series. Please keep it going.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Loving It

One of the best stories I've read. Please don't leave this story unfinished,

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
A Very Excellent Series.

A really great story that is well written with great plot and excellent character development. This is the best vampire story I have read on this site and well worth the 5-STARS I have given every chapter so far. I just read chapter 10 and enjoyed it. Keep up the good work and I am looking forward to chapter 11. I do not know if you plan on ending the series when they graduate from high school but I would love to see you continue it through their college years and into his career in law enforcement. Maybe their love for eachother will bring about changes in people's percession of the monster population in which thet are much more accepted by the humans and the segregation laws are repealed. Retired Army NCO

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Excellent writing...and about the easter eggs.

One of the best stories I have read in this site. I also like this modern fantasy, alternate history genre, so, this story appealed to me almost from the first paragraph. And oh, about those Easter eggs:

1. Vito's kitchen+ scaletta's = vito scaletta; reminds me of mafia 2 and 3.

2. Anton sokolov, that famous scientist, painter, and royal physician of the great city of dunwall. Honestly, I don't know why anyone else have not noticed/commented on this yet. Have the gamers stopped reading literotica stories?

Pops4Pops4about 4 years ago
Just Grand!!!!

This is a lovely story.

I realize that a good story needs some challenges for the protagonist to overcome, but I still dislike the theme as the “monsters” have not caused harm to the antagonists. Your story is wonderful, I am just concerned as to what may happen to the families.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
What?

Okay so how come I didn't get to have a sexy time sleep over with my high school girlfriend when we won a football game? "Let's all go back to our house to Celebrate the win. Sure you take my teenage virgin daughter back to your house to ride her all night. We don't mind. Have fun son."

SatyrDickSatyrDickalmost 2 years ago

[21.0722]

Love the Avicii's Levels reference!

11/10!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Great story but Chris is such a shitty character and why is Viktor so small and meek is that to make Chris look more masculine.

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