All Comments on 'Decisions Ch. 11'

Nice to see you back on track.

Good mix of sappy stuff - which I know is part of the whole thing - and the story :)

On one condition:

Promise us that if you ever feel the urge to revisit this universe in the future, you won't hold back.

-cittran

I really love this story and I can't wait for the next chapter!

Enjoying the story, however...

I know this is late in the tale to say this, but could you please add English translations after what I assume is Russian. It stops the story flow trying to work out what is said, and too often the translation is plain wrong. eg in one case 'lyubuv' was "Eastern European woman who is successful".

Well done, you have done well reducing the sappy comments, I still think you need to work on grammar a bit as it leaves something to be desired.

Anyways loved this chapter and can't wait for more, please keep up the amazing work.

Freeeekin Awesome!

Congratulations on a job well done, my friend! Just a couple of quick comments though. Firstly, if the next chapter is going to be the conclusion, you might like to consider making it an extra long one - (double or triple the regular length perhaps) plus an epilogue.

Secondly, if you ever decide to return to this story, would you be interested in retelling it from Viktor's perspective? He appears to be the 2nd most interesting character here.

Great job once again!

[23.07.22]

Looove the Prince, In-n-Out, and Dr. Akula bits!

11/10 Animal Style 4 x 4s!!!!!