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by CalleighLove
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Anonymousover 8 years agoGreat Start
Great start. Looking forward to where you will take this. Longer chapters would be nice too. :)
Anonymousover 8 years agoComparison with "Selchie"
Following up "Selchie" comment "Great beginnings, but…":
This story, "Declan", showed better control of punctuation, word choice, etc., and also presented the fantasy aspects a bit more clearly.
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