All Comments on 'Deep in the Heart of Me Ch. 03'

Just that, what an amazing story! One the best! Thanks. M

What a tease!! Please post soon!

What a cruel, cruel thing to do! But I must be a masochist because I can't get enough of this kind of cruelty! I can't wait to read the next installment!

fantastic again, continued to have me gripped. ,

cant wait for more from both sides.

Sorry Anons! I know it's a tease enough without the silly page-break promising more...! Formatting fail.

(glad you liked it anyway) ;)

- B

Page 3 wasn't what I expected. Great descriptions abound. Very vivid. (5 stars)

Totally top story. I'm riveted, please make it go on and on, don't stop where you got to with Stephs story, I need to live in their world a while longer!

really are a most remarkable writer Brunne. Terse, spare, intense... just beautiful.

That is how powerful this story was. No words can describe. You have claimed them all! I haven't given this many consecutive 5 star ratings in a LONG time. For a story that hasn't had any true fucking, this has been very moving. It is the evidence of a great writer. Please continue with this story, and don't make it short-lived or half-baked. Looking forward to more of your work, on any story. :)

Oh he's in for it now!

Your writing is wonderful, masterful, fantastic. Thanks for sharing your talent with us.

Im so l0ving this. It kind of getting me so adicted i have to be late f0r clas just to finish it, its s0 sensual and passi0nate., and its very different in the sense that its fr0m a mans perspective.