All Comments on 'Deep Undercover Ch. 01'

This is a really good story! You have me hooked ! Please don't be one of those authors that starts off strong then stops writing in the middle of the series.

I appreciate a lot of build up and character building, and you did just that. Great job, I'll definitely be coming back for more :)

With a Beta reader like Etaski, and your talent, this story can get very far.

Keep writing please!

Truly amazing lookinb forward to chapter 2 xx

That was a really good opener... Please keep going!

Just trying to work out how she's going to get away with claiming to be a whore who's never had anal though!

Really looking forward to more chapters, well done.

Great story!

Very nicely done...can't wait to read future chapters! Keep them coming!

This is not what I normally read, but it was good. Hope to read more.

You definitely know how to write an erotic story that keeps me wanting more. Loved the girl on girl action. And your anal scene was fantastic. I'm also surprised that she was pretending to be a whore who had never done anal before but the scene was awesome! Very well done. Now for parts 2 and 3.

I enjoy these stories but I need something more. I'm 29 and I feel like an old maid. I'm married to a great guy but he's married to his work. He's an attorney -- very determined to become a partner. I'm sure he'll do it! Meanwhile, he's working 70-80 hour wks and I'm reading these stories.

I'm an Elementary School teacher. I love my work but I have a lot of free time on my hands. I jog and go to the gym and I stay in shape. Obviously, I also read a lot. Yes, I have a very healthy libido. And unfortunately, it's rarely satisfied.

I felt quite guilty about all of this at first but I have my needs dammit. I've made that very clear to my husband and he doesn't seem to care. Having said that, I love my husband and I'm not going to do anything stupid to risk my marriage.

How can I have some fun w/o the risk. You write great stories! Sorry, I should have said that at the beginning. I love your stories! They have given me more pleasure than my husband! I put myself in the stories! I need more. I need more! Please let me know if you or your readers have any suggestions re: how I might (safely) accomplish this.

Laura

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So obvious that this story was written by a guy, from all the male cops calling Dana "baby" to the two-page long lesbian sex scene. The anal was hot though.

Story was ok but I feel like my time got robbed with having no ending. Plus I could tell what was going to happen next before it did.

It's like the author thought to himself '' I have to mow the lawn , fuck this story, it's finished ''

do more please

I loved it 😘