All Comments on 'Deep Undercover Ch. 02'

She is in deep shit but it's fucking hot!

I could not put this chapter down while getting ready for work this morning.

Great story!

I hope the next is not going to be the last chapter

This is wonderful ! So, soooo hot, but more than that, it's a great story. The new John Sandford novel is sitting on my night stand, completely neglected because I'm wrapped up in your story. Excellent writing! Great twist at the end...can't wait for the next installment !!! More, please. :-)

I'm enjoying this very much. You need to write a book!

Wow ...this is a whole cut above the usual stories on here .Absolutely brilliant.!

This plot is one of the best! I can`t wait for next installment.

Love it.

Terrifically well written story with a plot and also character development. I love how Dana keeps getting in deeper and hope the ending is not all that happy for her.

Will there be any more chapters? I'm dying to know what happens!

There were a few more minor errors in this chapter compared to Chapter 01, so hope you slow down and not rush the next chapters. But those were the technical aspects.

The plot is great, although having the mother enjoy her use was a bit odd...a non-consentual scene would be more expected; however, that was just my own opinion--the entire scene was done well.

Can't wait for the next chapter!

The dialogue in this and the other chapter really bring the characters to life. I'll definitely be reading more of your work.

I've read chapters 1&2 and wow! That's a wicked ride. Chaper 2 ended with a "Holy shit!" I was shocked! Everybody is getting a taste.

I can't wait for more!!

Good follow up to the first chapter, excellent writing skills and character development. Agree that the sister, wife and mother had slightly odd reactions to being raped while their brother was held at gun point but, ok. The general's uncut penis blow job was disgusting and hilarious. Looking forward to reading the next and final chapter.

LOL Excellent!

Fun story that is potentially so much more!

Hope we get to see more of Josefina. Maybe Franklin can satisfy her. lol