All Comments on 'Deep Undercover Ch. 04'

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The two main characters, Madison and Alex, seem realistic. The issue of Madison going from the official side to the other side with Alex might need a little more back ground development. So far so good, unless there is a plot turn coming up. Enjoyable and keep 'em coming.

whatever it is she is clearly a failure, maybe the local PTA or library. If this is any indication of the level of expertise of intelligence agents or law enforcement, no wonder our countries are going 'to the dogs' and criminals and terrorists are free to do their worse.

I love this story so much! Keep writing them!

For the individual with the comment titled "what is she supposed to be an agent for?": Just relax, it is a story, a fantasy. Not real life! Stop being so serious and relax and just enjoy.

Love, love, love the story. It's fucking hot. Sign me up for some of that! Keep it coming! Looking forward to more.

Please write more. I love this story.

Now I can't use my twist ending where it turns out she's been a member of the PTA all along! Back to the drawing board...

Joking aside, I continue to be grateful for any and all criticism and encouragement (as eventually I hope this becomes more than a series of chapters online, and I know that this will require more development).

Chapter 5 is coming soon! ;)

Love these! Keep them coming.

Wow you are the best author !!!!! Great job

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