All Comments on 'Defences Activated'

For a quickie, you put a lot of interesting things in it. This really can be used as a basis for a few different story lines, covering various characters, plots, and genres. I like the way you write about the ability to mind control someone without going through a lot of technical problems that readers will fight about. If you don't decide to continue this story or use it for a new story line, will you allow others to do so?

5*

Normally I don't read Mind Control stories, they mostly seem to be boilerplate and often poorly thought out (even more so than Loving Wives stories).

This was different and thought provoking and well written.

One quibble, shouldn't the tag be 'submissive female'?

I didn't notice any 'submissive male' in the story.