by bumblegrum
I am so pleased you decided to continue with this. Maybe you will return to it at a later stage Thanks
P.P
Well written and a very good story. Thanks you deserve the 5 stars!
Manfred
How can he be twenty, his grandmother in her forties! What is the mothers age, doesn't make sense
His grandmother is 57, read the previous chapter. As for the story, getting interesting, can't wait for more.
Any chance of this series continuing? It would be interesting to see what happens with him and his mother along with his grandmother.
Loved the 2nd part and would like to see a Act 03, with his mother pregnant - that the birth control didn't work as it has a tendency not to work on some women. Would love to see him having a sister by his mother and her observations growing up with her father/brother. Please think about it. Also would like more about mom on grandmother - that part was really hot for me and I am wet reading the 2nd act of the story.
I loved these two stories. I also agree with the arlier comments. Please give us ACT03. And, soon.
Go wfor the twin aunts in one big submissive harem without any sharing.
How about writing another chapter and get the twins involved?
You have the secret and make the most of it. Great theme, great writing, needs more from you......
I really loved this story but the PILL no, I would have like the mum suggest that she make a little master for her master. That's my opinion , 5 star anyway
The Pill has no business in Mom/Son relationship!
Good thing Eve did not have the Pill or her son would not have been able to beget any offspring with her.
Then where would the Human race be??????
I hope you continue this story maybe set it a year later to see the changes in their lives. Perhaps Drew could have Beth and Olivia take turns being the Lady of the manor and the other acts as their servant even to dress as a French Maid. Also hope that the BDSM isn't forgotten maybe have a room converted into a Dungeon/Playroom.
Enjoy what? This was a complete clusterfuck with thoroughly unlikable characters doing really stupid, unbelievable things for no rhyme or reason. Laughably bad.
I notice you haven’t got the guts or the intelligence to use your name. Anonymous comments are for cowards who like to hide behind anonymity. So you can get fucked!