by LaLaLady
i feel kinda bad know that her dad and mom didnt get a happily ever after :( poor king. although this was a very fast paced chapter one minute her daughters back , the next shes planning some more kids and then she discovers a murderer carnt wait for more please hurry up.
I'm not gonna complain how short it is...actually i'm glad u brought it back...i was hopeless that u're not gonna continue the story coz i love it so much. Keep us up dated, please...please.... Thank u! =)
I hope that heifer gets what's coming to her for killing the king! I can see Ella being Tolem's spoiled little daddy's girl, but in a good way. I want to know what they're future children are going to look like :) I'm glad you updated because I really like this story.
I had to read the other chapters again so I remembered what was going on. It was a bit short but good. I'm glad that Deidre and Tolem will be together. I wonder when they'll figure out that Ella is the next seer? I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Hopefully it'll be long enough to really get into.
Although I love this story, I was wondering when you would update THE MERGER.
Dang this was a great story ive just got done reading it and want more if this was a moveid give it two thumbs way way way way way way way way up
The story is sweet. However, some editing is needed: your instead of you're; "How did" instead of "How'd do". Earlier you got names mixed up.